I had written a short story first draft and was really proud of it. When I went to work on the second draft I decided to take the advice of some very smart peers with the same creative ambition as myself. Only they really know what they are talking about!
When I took their advice the focus of my new story changed. It started flowing out of me and stopped only because my paying job called. Oh well there’s always tomorrow!
I can’t wait to see where else this story takes me.